so I got bored and uh
The story
so yeah
I write songs sometimes
on the way home from after schol band practice yesterday
I came up with a song in my mom's car lol.
I only have most of the chorus
I need to know:
1: is it good?
2: what line should I add to finish the chorus?
It's in the style of like, think Three Days Grace or Linkin Park
here it is:
"And all the colours fade to black
I can't keep going forward, but I can't turn back,
I'm conflicted,
I am stuck,
I'm so sick of feeling numb,"
So that's it
I need another line but idk what to put
and I have no verses either but I'll figure that out myself lol
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Points of view
While I appreciate the creativity and effort you have invested in composing your song, I must express my perspective that the theme of the lyrics seems somewhat conventional or familiar; the exploration of themes like feeling "conflicted" or "numb" is prevalent in much of the music within the rock genre, especially in the style of bands like Three Days Grace and Linkin Park which you've cited. Even classics like "In the End" by Linkin Park delve into similar feelings, and though it resonates with many, finding a unique angle could enhance your artistry. Furthermore, the existing lines do encapsulate strong emotional undertones, yet the potential for growth lies in venturing beyond the archetypal expressions of numbness and stagnation to craft a more distinctive narrative or perspective. Striving for originality while maintaining relatability is essential, and I encourage you to expand your creative horizons.
This journey of composing music is indeed both challenging and rewarding, so keep pushing those boundaries and remember that every artist evolves through experimentation, and the next groundbreaking lyric could be just around the corner 🤘
yeah I was just writing what I felt at the time :P I rlly need to stop doing that ig lol! tysm for the advice!