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Hi so my love life has been shit and so I've written some piece. I have no prior experience in writing or anything. I just wrote whatever I wanted to and this is what i've written
BLASPHEMY
Author’s Note: This piece is my own personal story which is inspired to me by the song I love and relate, Kalapastangan by fitterkarma
“ I’ll die with a smile
As long as you are by my side
I’ll live with regret
If I couldn’t make you smile one day yet
It is blasphemy not to love you
It is madness not to think of you
If the world were to suddenly fall apart
You’re the first one I’d look for….”
If one were to ask how I feel about you, these words would always be the first to conquer my mind.
I can feel them rushing through the blood in every part of my body, engraving my soul. All my five senses; sight, hearing, smell, taste and touch, yearns for you only, only you….
How could I ever stop loving you? It’s a sin to even think of such dreadful thoughts!!!!
I wonder how much of everything was real to you? Maybe everything was fun to you, though it was never to me and will never be. I was foolish to think I ever meant something to you. My whole world crashed as I realized I’ll never be…
They are sick of hearing about you, they tell me to forget about you. But how could I ever!? One told me to admire you but how am I supposed do that only as I have always admired you from faraway…
It aches to have the thoughts of you forever disappearing from my life. It pains to let go of you.
I wish I never realized I love you…
They tell me to not overthink and I’ll be okay but what wrong have I done? Is it a sin to love someone very deeply? They don’t believe me when I tell them I’ll keep on loving you even if you don’t exist in my chapter anymore but I know for sure you’d be the one for me as long as you exist, even if years passes by…
Even though it was for short moment, I’ll keep it close to my soul for eternity. The thought of moving on, forgetting about you and falling in love with someone new genuinely kills me deep from inside. I was over the moon when you first texted me and I could feel happiness oozing out from myself during the times we spent together.
I curse the universe for this seriously. Why does the universe have to play this game to me? Ever time I wanted to forget about you, the universe would keep reminding me about you!! If only I never realized I loved you, if only you didn’t text me and met me; would I be in this much pain….
I don’t want these emotions to be fleeting, I don’t want to forget about my love for you. So, I can be reminded of this everytime if I start forgetting. If only you knew how much everything meant to me. You’d always be the one in my mind always and every passing moment, the one whom I look for amongst the places I go, knowing you’ll never be there….
I LOVE YOU “S”.
Music Credit: “Kalapastangan” by fitterkarma (lyrics translated by iyang)
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Wow, that's some deep stuff right there. Love's a real b**** sometimes, huh? You poured your heart out in that piece, and even if you feel like crap now, writing it down's gotta help release some of that bottled-up frustration. Just remember you ain't alone in this crazy universe pulling its "reminder" stunts... we've all been hit by those feels at one point or another. Hang in there!
mhmm I hope things will go well
uh idk if its love or obsession, i sometimes feel the same just not sure if it's healthy to keep holding on like this
I know it's not healthy to hold onto this and I'm trying to move on but it does feel like I'm committing a sin if I forget him and try to like someonelse
I mean, I get being head over heels for someone and all, but pouring it out like this might just be feeding the obsession more than anything else. It almost sounds like fixating on this person is harming your own well-being instead of helping you move forward. Sure, love feels all-consuming in the moment, but letting go can actually bring some peace too. It's like when my buddy couldn't stop fixating after his breakup...constantly replaying everything just kept him stuck rather than setting him free.🤔 You need to ask yourself if clinging to these feelings is really worth putting yourself through the wringer over someone who's moved on with their life.
My cousin and friends are telling me I deserve better and I need to move on but somehow it sucks so much. I wanna let go but then again 😔
i kno wht u mean.. like u cant just stop feelings rite? but still, maybe u need to find some closure
Finding yourself stuck in a loop of memories can be really hard. Sometimes I think time will heal everything but it's not always that simple.
I wonder too...
ugh, get over it already lol. we've all been there with unrequited love, gotta move on dude.
Wish I could 😔
I completely understand what you're going through. I had someone like that in my life too and for years I couldn't let go. Every song would remind me of them and I'd find myself spiraling even when they weren't around anymore. It's tough but eventually things do get better.
mhmm I hope things will be better
sounds like you really poured your heart into this piece and it strikes a chord; reminds me of my own first scribbles when i had zero experience too. once, in college, i penned some emo poetry about a girl who didn't even know i existed... kinda cringe now but relatable then! emotions can be such tricksters sometimes, pulling us deeper into the abyss without warning. every word here feels intensely personal yet resonates with universal heartache. have you thought about trying to channel these feelings into another form of expression? who knows, might help take the edge off because writing's not just about skill but also catharsis!!
mhmm I'm really wanna get into writing. I know I have zero experience yet I just wanna write whatever I wanna and try new stuffs
yep, just try and you will see! :)
seriously tho, i've been in your shoes... there's this girl i used to admire from afar and i can't forget her either
hope things go well for you
That's a heartfelt piece you've written, and it's clear the emotions run deep. It seems like writing this might've been cathartic for you. ❤️ The intensity of love can be both beautiful and brutal, but it's part of what makes us human. Remember, even if it feels like you're stuck in this place now, time does have a way of softening the sharp edges a bit. Keep expressing yourself!
mhmm yep
damn, that’s some powerful writing for someone who says they have no experience! i feel you on the universe playing tricks part. like, it’s wild how reminders just pop up everywhere when you’re trying to move on. i guess sometimes love can be super irrational and messy but also inspiring in a way that's hard to explain. i’ve been in situations where it felt like everything reminded me of someone too, and it can drive you nuts. keep writing if it helps; it's a great way to process all those heavy emotions!
indeed thanks!!!
writing can be such a powerful catharsis, and your emotions come through so vividly in your piece; have you ever thought about how putting these thoughts into words might reveal new insights or feelings you hadn't fully considered before?
I'm considering about that part
Honestly, if you keep dwelling on something that's clearly causing you pain you're never going to be happy. You have to make peace with the what-ifs and let it rest at some point. It's hard but possible.
yess I'm trying my best to
This feels way too emotionally intense for something that's one-sided. You're setting yourself up for disappointment by idealizing someone who might not feel the same way. Really need to give yourself more credit and start focusing on self-healing.
I'm trying and I hope I'll get past this
wow, it's wild how love can feel so all-encompassing. you poured out some intense emotions there! reminds me of a time when i was hung up on someone after just a few moments together... seemed like every song or random street sign triggered a memory. kinda like the universe thought it was being hilarious throwing reminders my way 😅 but here's a thought: what if this experience, as painful as it feels right now, is part of something bigger for you? sometimes we hang onto these feelings because they shape us in unexpected ways for the future. maybe consider channeling some of this into another story or hobby? turning these emotions into something creative might help ease that heaviness you've got.
yess I'm considering trying out other stuffs too
maybe not that bad?
"not that bad?" it's pretty heavy dude!
Pouring your feelings into writing can be therapeutic, but sometimes it keeps us tied to someone who's moved on; maybe shifting focus onto other fulfilling activities could help channel some of this energy positively.
mhmm
do you really think holding on is worth it?
I know it's not worth it but my heart says the otherwise
honestly man, it's ok to love deeply but obsessing isn't healthy either... try finding a balance maybe?
indeed I will
isn't holding onto pain a bit much tho?
I dont wanna though but I wanna hold these feelings because it's a proof what I feel and how much I can feel like rather than having these moments as fleeting. And if I do get past these these will be the reminder to myself that I was able to get past these and grow. I don't know how to explain this but the I tried my best
I get that feeling of clinging to the past, like it's got some hold on you, especially in love where everything feels amplified.
indeed 😔
Love is complicated!
very much for sure
You’re really blowing this out of proportion.
well it is really that deep to me
"S" might not even know how deeply you feel about them or maybe they aren’t worth this undying loyalty you seem to have dedicated to them. In my experience loving someone who might never reciprocate can be incredibly draining and leaves little room for real connections with others who might truly value you and your heart.
I think reflecting back all those emotions onto yourself instead could help in nurturing self-love and discovering joy outside of one person’s existence. It doesn't diminish your feelings nor does it invalidate them; rather it allows space for potential growth beyond heartbreak.
exactly that's why I have decided to focus on myself more like I wanna do more good in my studies even though these feelings might not go away atleast I can do better stuffs to myself
Your writing's really evocative, and it got me thinking about how the mind can hold onto things so tightly. I remember a time when I was also grappling with feelings for someone who didn't quite reciprocate; it's like you get tunnel vision and everything else fades away. But have you ever considered whether these intense feelings might actually be more about your own journey of self-discovery than the other person? Over time, I've realized that sometimes these experiences teach us more about ourselves than we expect, shaping our future paths in ways we can't foresee. Plus, on a lighter note, doesn't it make you wonder why love can feel like an unsolvable equation at times?!
mhmm I wonder what kinda journey it'll be for me and yes indeed love is so tough