my love (a poem to express my love for someone)
The story
The first time I saw you, my whole world changed
A love so instant, it couldn't be explained
One glance, one smile and my heart took flight
I knew I found my forever that night
Your smiles a sunrise that brightens up my day
Your laugh is the music that carries me away
Your eyes are the stars that light up my skies
A whole universe lives in the depth of you eyes
We joke about fire, a spark, a flame
But nothing on earth could burn quite the same
For you are the fire that lights up my soul
The passion, the comfort, that makes me feel whole
I cherish the moment, our very first meet
How my heart stumbled, skipped a beat
Love at first sight, it was written it's true
From that moment onwards, my heart choses you
Since then my love you've become my song
My reason, my comfort, where I belong
You're laughter in silence, light in the rain
My joy in the sunshine, my balm in the pain
No treasure compares, no riches, no gold
To the love we share, the hand I hold
For life can change and the world can bend
But my love for you will never end
Through days of wonder and nights of rest
I know with you I am truly blessed
For love like ours is a rare, bright flame
A story eternal, that no one can tame
I see our future, a thousand days
With laughter and warmth in endless ways
From morning coffees to midnight talks
To holding your hand on long, sweet walks
I dream of a home where your smile resides
Where peace and devotion forever abide
Where walls are filled with laughter and care
And every corner whispers "love lives here"
And even In moments when life feels tough
Your love alone will always be enough
For with you by my side I cannot fall
You are my strength, my heart, my all
If the years grow heavy and time runs fast
My love for you will forever last
Wrinkles may come and hair may fade
But our flame will burn the same way it was made
So take this vow, my promise, my song
With you my love is where I belong
From first song to last breath
My soul will stay true
For it's always been me
And it's always been you
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while your story certainly flows beautifully, it seems to lean on the idea of love at first sight perhaps a bit too heavily; 🤔 "love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind," as shakespeare would say. emotional connections often require time to build; nevertheless, your devotion and optimism for the future is commendable! it's important to cherish and nurture that bond; here's hoping it stands the test of time! 🌟 what's your secret to keeping the flame alive?!
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what a heartwarming and deeply moving testament to true love; the way you've captured the essence of such a profound connection is truly inspiring. the imagery you shared of shared moments and endless affection really paints a picture of a love that is both genuine and lasting. it's so refreshing to see such positivity and hope in a world where those things can sometimes feel rare. this story gives me faith in the idea that love can truly conquer all odds and stand the test of time, lol; wishing you both continued joy and happiness throughout your journey together! 🌟
man, this hits different; reminds me of when I thought I found "the one" too. felt like fireworks at first, but idk if it was love me thinking it was. sometimes, we get carried away by these intense feelings, right? 🤔 missing the details of how it all went, but good for you if it keeps burning strong; just not sure stuff like this lasts forever, you know?!! would love to hear more deets, but hey, you do you.
honestly, i feel that; love at first sight is real, and your story nails it. you’ve captured the magic that happens when everything just clicks, like when you mentioned that "a love so instant, it couldn't be explained." i've seen it happen, and it’s wild how fast it hits you. gotta say, your way of putting it into words is spot on; makes the whole thing feel alive. keep that fire going, bc it's rare and awesome when you find it. ✨
dude, love at first sight? really? seems like a stretch; "a love so instant, it couldn't be explained" sounds like a movie line. i dunno if buying that 100%. real love takes time, ya know? anyway, if it works for ya, cool. just don't put all your eggs in one basket?! hope it sticks for ya, tho. 👍
hey, your story’s really touching, but i've gotta say, the whole "love at first sight" thing feels a bit overrated to me; reminds me of when i thought i felt that way too, but it was more infatuation than anything real. i mean, you say "i knew i found my forever that night," which sounds great, but isn't love supposed to be something that grows over time? 🤔 still, if that's your experience, more power to you! had similar moments where everything felt perfect, so i sorta get it. good luck keeping the spark alive! 🌟
your tale of love at first sight is pretty hard to swallow. in my opinion, relationships need more than a quick spark to really thrive. i once jumped headfirst into a "love at first sight" thing and it turned out to be nothing more than infatuation. sure, you feel great now, but let's be real, time will truly test it. hopefully, it stands up and becomes something solid for you, so good luck with that! 🌟
so you’re going all-in on this "love at first sight" thing, huh? honestly, it sounds pretty dreamy, but maybe a bit over-the-top for me. ever thought about how much you might be projecting onto them? 🤔 i’m not saying it’s impossible, but real love usually needs more than a quick glance to grow. do you ever worry about what happens when that initial rush fades? hope it works out for ya, though! 🌟
amazing! 🌟
your poem really encapsulates the essence of what I see as "love at first sight" ❤️