missing (sometimes I feel like I'm better off missing)
The story
You wander through the foggy streets
Wondering if anyone's noticed
Your thoughts circling around and around
You walk and walk
Not sure where your going
Or what your plan is
You just want to run
It starts to rain
You look up
Letting the symphony of falling water wash over you
You scream
The world not hearing you
They've never heard you
They never will
You watch the sun awaken from its slumber
Hearing them screaming out your name
Yelling for you to come home
You stand up
Wipe your muddy hands
Wipe your cascading eyes
And run and run
Hoping you'll run off the planet
One day hopefully
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i gotta say, your words kinda hit home for me, wandering through those foggy streets feeling like a ghost, it’s like reading my own thoughts. i know the whole looking up into the rain bit is cliche but let’s be real, who hasn’t done that, right? reminds me of when i used to go for late-night walks just to clear my head. and yeah, i've shouted into the void too. the way you described the sun waking up is pretty vivid. even though it's a bit of a messy write-up, the running till you drop vibe is something I can totally vibe with. keep at it, coz there's something really genuine in there 🌟
thank u so much all my poems are written from experiences and are on my page if u want to have a look :)
where can I see that?
I think if u search my account name they'll come up
oh yes indeed, I checked the latest stories, thanks! Could be nice if the website allows me to click on your name to see the content you posted!
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